This is also a criminally undercommented project...so I'm going to give you some thoughts.
The colour palette you use in your levels is really striking. Pinks, blues, violetts and then stark oranges. It has a rather unique flair to it as its so out there and yet subdued. Your level design is classy as always and apart from some higher polygon models, it reminds of something that might run on mobile or an obscure asian online shooter. Stuff like
coded arms.
Now apart from the architecture...which is uncharacteristically open and clean for a Bugsy-Indoorsy level you often tend to have these kinda rectangular rooms with just random stuff in them.
Like this. These always stand out to me as looking characteristically...err...game guru/fpsc levelish. room, entities. Like...what even happens in this room? Really uncomfortable alien porn? There is all these space, these crates (so storage) a random ladder and just a cable on the ceiling. Yet consoles on the wall. Not that much of a fan of those.
Since I'm being annoying, lets also point out the smoothing group issues on the gun and that I always find it kinda off how you position the thumb on your rigs. (not as off as what gearbox does. They always have the thumb kinda point outward...it irks me.
Example one Example two example three. It definately looks as if there is no weight to the gun and he is really straining his muscles to keep this position. ... you know that I am ultra nitpicking here...but hey, thats also feedback. See
this looks more natural to me.
What else...ah yeah, your own animated fan is cooler than mine and that skybox is really sexy. It looks way better than actual 3d buildings AND safes you frames. You should really design for portable games. Someone should hire you yesterday.
Also, ahem, you gotta
burp you really gotta edit that interface. Know what I did in redacted 2? I don't mind the menues, those where complete horse crap, but the little pistol icon, the crosshair, the numbers... gotta get some colours and stuff in it, Morty, you can't just
burp leave it like that. Like neoooon something. Blue, pink...whatever!
-Wolf
