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Peri
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Posted: 10th Jan 2018 21:53 Edited at: 10th Jan 2018 22:29
FUNKY JACK


Developer: Eldar Peri

Storyline: The year 1975 you playing as Jack a guy who just back from Vietnam into the gangs problem in New York streets.
With a help from a rich person who's care Jack try to fight the gangs and find a larger crime network in the city, but its not so easy, jack can lose
everything, he need to deal with the police sometimes and to protect his girlfriend Chelsie.

Description: A urban shooter with 70s style and story, based on the dark side of New York at 1970s, in the game you got missions of shooting, puzzles ,finding objects and more, there is story cutscenes and comics.








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Posted: 11th Jan 2018 04:43
this looks really good.
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Posted: 11th Jan 2018 08:03
Thanks MXS glad you like it
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Posted: 11th Jan 2018 20:57 Edited at: 11th Jan 2018 20:58
good start. I'd tune up your lighting colors from the defaults though. I have a color chart I use, personally from here:
- http://planetpixelemporium.com/tutorialpages/light.html

Anyways looks good, level design and models are pretty solid. It's also good you're sticking with a primarily outdoor game so it doesn't bite you in the butt. Maybe add some atmospheric fog per this article: http://gamegurureport.blogspot.com/2016/09/technique-training-fog-and.html

Also I'll add your project to my weekly roundup next week.

Good luck with your project
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Posted: 12th Jan 2018 06:52
Thanks
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I am taking your tips
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Posted: 12th Jan 2018 11:01
Looks really good. One bit of advice, and please take this as advice to help improve, not a slur. In your comic, the grammar and even some of the words are just terrible, i assume English isn't your first language? I would highly recommend giving someone who's a native English speaker the script to go through, things like that really stand out when you publish games, and the critics can be very nasty about it.

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Posted: 12th Jan 2018 12:12 Edited at: 12th Jan 2018 12:19
Thanks @Belidos I know, its not final and I am giving for a English speaker friend to fix my bad English but yes I heard that before.
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Posted: 12th Jan 2018 21:21
I love that you keep this up. 70s underground grime is rarely tackled by the media and I think this is a very interesting concept.
I agree with Belidos... as a non english speaker with some cringe worthy early releases under my belt, have your text proof read by someone who's native before release

I can almost hear the tone of the conversation suggested in this screenshot...
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Posted: 14th Jan 2018 16:06 Edited at: 14th Jan 2018 16:07
Haha, thanks Wolf I am also follow your projects, yes there is not much games about the 70s, my inspiration is from Taxi driver, The Warriors and more.
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Posted: 14th Jan 2018 20:51 Edited at: 14th Jan 2018 20:53
I just want to know what part of the comic was really bad to your eyes.
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Posted: 14th Jan 2018 23:20 Edited at: 14th Jan 2018 23:25
Wicked ! tbh i cant see anything wrong with the grammar in the comic bit? depending on what the content of the conversation is of course and how it started, i presume it was a snippet? Jeez you want to hear how the kids here speak now i hardly understand them rofl
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