FUNKY JACK


Developer: Eldar Peri

Storyline: The year 1975 you playing as Jack a guy who just back from Vietnam into the gangs problem in New York streets.
With a help from a rich person who's care Jack try to fight the gangs and find a larger crime network in the city, but its not so easy, jack can lose
everything, he need to deal with the police sometimes and to protect his girlfriend Chelsie.

Description: A urban shooter with 70s style and story, based on the dark side of New York at 1970s, in the game you got missions of shooting, puzzles ,finding objects and more, there is story cutscenes and comics.

this looks really good.

Thanks MXS glad you like it

good start. I'd tune up your lighting colors from the defaults though. I have a color chart I use, personally from here:
- http://planetpixelemporium.com/tutorialpages/light.html

Anyways looks good, level design and models are pretty solid. It's also good you're sticking with a primarily outdoor game so it doesn't bite you in the butt. Maybe add some atmospheric fog per this article: http://gamegurureport.blogspot.com/2016/09/technique-training-fog-and.html

Also I'll add your project to my weekly roundup next week.

Good luck with your project

Thanks
Bolt Action Gaming
I am taking your tips

Looks really good. One bit of advice, and please take this as advice to help improve, not a slur. In your comic, the grammar and even some of the words are just terrible, i assume English isn't your first language? I would highly recommend giving someone who's a native English speaker the script to go through, things like that really stand out when you publish games, and the critics can be very nasty about it.

Thanks @Belidos I know, its not final and I am giving for a English speaker friend to fix my bad English but yes I heard that before.

I love that you keep this up. 70s underground grime is rarely tackled by the media and I think this is a very interesting concept.
I agree with Belidos... as a non english speaker with some cringe worthy early releases under my belt, have your text proof read by someone who's native before release

I can almost hear the tone of the conversation suggested in this screenshot...

Haha, thanks Wolf I am also follow your projects, yes there is not much games about the 70s, my inspiration is from Taxi driver, The Warriors and more.

I just want to know what part of the comic was really bad to your eyes.

Wicked ! tbh i cant see anything wrong with the grammar in the comic bit? depending on what the content of the conversation is of course and how it started, i presume it was a snippet? Jeez you want to hear how the kids here speak now i hardly understand them rofl
@ Belidos your getting old dude pmsl

Not so much grammar, as wrong words used.

"People are staying at home, and business are weak"

Should really be: People are staying at home, and business is weak.

"What about the bodyguard job, why didn't you took it?"

Should really be: What about the bodyguard job, why didn't you take it.

"Naa, i don't going to risk my life again for some rich kids"

Should be either: Nah, i'm not going to risk my life again for some rich kids. or Nah, i'm not risking my life again for some rich kids.

"now give me this wine here"

Should be: now give me that wine there.



Hope that helps you peri.

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