note_sonic=0 --This is not used at all through the script..
--START OF FRAME
function sparck_note_init(e)
	note=0
	stop=0
end

--ALWAYS--
function sparck_note_main(e) --You forgot to put main here..
	
	PlayerDist=GetPlayerDistance(e)
	if(PlayerDist < 200) and (g_PlayerHealth > 0) then
	--GetEntityPlayerVisibility(e) --Not sure what this is but it did not seem to work..
		--I put this in instead of the above because I thought you meant this..
		--if g_Entity[e]['plrvisible'] == 1 then --This produces 0 only when I tested it..
		if note == 0 then --With this slight change you get rid of this prompt when the note is showing..
			Prompt ("Press E to Read Note")
			--ON PRESS E SHOW Note
			if g_KeyPressE == 1 then
				note = note + 1 --Stop this prompt from happenning..
				PlaySound(e,0)
				--Not sure why you wanted this but you did not need to put the e between the brackets..
				FreezePlayer()
			end
		end
			
		if note > 0 then
			--note = note + 1 --Don't no why you need this here, it works fine without it..
			--This will put the text at x and y and give it the size 3..
			--Text(x,y,size,'Text')
			Text(28,40,3, "nota")
		end
		--end 
	end
end

--Of course this script is only any good for one message to be shown
--no matter how many entities it is put on..

note_sonic = 0 --This is not used at all through the script..
timesread = {}
--START OF FRAME
function sparck_note_init(e)
	note = 0
	timesread[e] = 0
	notetext = "nota"
	stop = 0
	pausetime = 0
	secondstopause = 15 --The ammount of seconds that you want to pause..
end

--ALWAYS--
function sparck_note_main(e) --You forgot to put main here..
	
	PlayerDist=GetPlayerDistance(e)
	if(PlayerDist < 200) and (g_PlayerHealth > 0) then
		if note == 0 then --With this slight change you get rid of this prompt when the note is showing..
			Prompt ("Press E to Read Note")
			--ON PRESS E SHOW Note
			if g_KeyPressE == 1 then
				note = note + 1 --Stop this prompt from happenning..
				PlaySound(e,0)
				timesread[e] = timesread[e] + 1
				currenttime = os.time()
				pausetime = currenttime + secondstopause --Get the current time plus seconds to pause in seconds..
				--Not sure why you wanted this but you did not need to put the e between the brackets..
				FreezePlayer()
			end
		end
			
		if note > 0 then
			if os.time() <= pausetime then
				--note = note + 1 --Don't no why you need this here, it works fine without it..
				--This will put the text at x and y and give it the size 3..
				--Text(x,y,size,'Text')
				if timesread[e] >= 2 then
					Text(28,37,3, "This Note has been read before.")
					Text(28,41,3, notetext)
				else
					Text(28,40,3, notetext)
				end	
			else
				UnFreezePlayer()
				note = 0
				pausetime = 0
			end
		end
		--end 
	end
	--PromptLocal(e,os.time() .. ", " .. pausetime)
end